Love is sacrifice. Mary gasped for breath. Those who know no sacrifice cannot love. Her own silent sobs seemed to echo the screams in her mind. Sacrifice, she told herself under her breath, sacrifice. Her temples throbbed as veins pulsed at her heart's galloping rhythm. He had never known any. Her arm ached. Love was a force to be feared and revered. Tears, now dry, had left her with burning eyes. She had been ready to give him all the love she had. A bitter taste lingered in her mouth. She had loved. Her face was distorted from hate, sadness, fulfillment. And love. Love, all of it, forever. Her hand still felt the bite. To love is to give it
If you could chose to live in the land of dreams ruled only by limitless imagination, would you do so? You should never.
The outside world, the one I now know for real was finally linked to ours, as if it had reached out and touched us. It had grabbed us into itself, and there was nothing we could do about it.
A dulled shriek sounded from the outside. We hardly noticed.
The outside was like a dream to us: sometimes scary, sometimes appealing, but never true enough to attract our curiosity for more than a few seconds. I had glanced through the windows several times, but never long enough to really realize what it was. That was a long ti
Like That it Has Always Been.. by DeaNyx, literature
Literature
Like That it Has Always Been..
Ŝa'ahn is hard to reach, and of the few travelers who go there, few come back. The rare accounts that outsiders have of this city are from merchants, who travel the eastern roads in the search for infinite riches. It is the city of splendor, they all tell us, a city where all are rich, and even the slaves, that call themselves "high servants", can wear gold bracelets and pearl necklaces.
No one is allowed to work for more than an hour a day, and those who try are mocked by the others. "What are you trying to hide from" they ask "your own conscience or something deeper still?" Despite these contemptuous insults, nobody stops them from wo
The sky was blue, dotted only by a few cottony clouds here and there. The atmosphere felt light, floating somewhere between cool and warm.
* * *
Softly, the breeze rustles through the small plant's leaves and caresses the man planting it. It slides trough the window, gently raises the curtain with a whisper and kindly touches the girl sitting on the living-room carpet. It feels her skin, and smoothly plays with her hair. The eight year-old silently keeps on playing with a doll under her mother's gracious gaze. Inside the house, calm reigns like it only can on a Sunday evening.
"Normally, at this time of day, I would have been playing in
Love is sacrifice. Mary gasped for breath. Those who know no sacrifice cannot love. Her own silent sobs seemed to echo the screams in her mind. Sacrifice, she told herself under her breath, sacrifice. Her temples throbbed as veins pulsed at her heart's galloping rhythm. He had never known any. Her arm ached. Love was a force to be feared and revered. Tears, now dry, had left her with burning eyes. She had been ready to give him all the love she had. A bitter taste lingered in her mouth. She had loved. Her face was distorted from hate, sadness, fulfillment. And love. Love, all of it, forever. Her hand still felt the bite. To love is to give it
If you could chose to live in the land of dreams ruled only by limitless imagination, would you do so? You should never.
The outside world, the one I now know for real was finally linked to ours, as if it had reached out and touched us. It had grabbed us into itself, and there was nothing we could do about it.
A dulled shriek sounded from the outside. We hardly noticed.
The outside was like a dream to us: sometimes scary, sometimes appealing, but never true enough to attract our curiosity for more than a few seconds. I had glanced through the windows several times, but never long enough to really realize what it was. That was a long ti
Like That it Has Always Been.. by DeaNyx, literature
Literature
Like That it Has Always Been..
Ŝa'ahn is hard to reach, and of the few travelers who go there, few come back. The rare accounts that outsiders have of this city are from merchants, who travel the eastern roads in the search for infinite riches. It is the city of splendor, they all tell us, a city where all are rich, and even the slaves, that call themselves "high servants", can wear gold bracelets and pearl necklaces.
No one is allowed to work for more than an hour a day, and those who try are mocked by the others. "What are you trying to hide from" they ask "your own conscience or something deeper still?" Despite these contemptuous insults, nobody stops them from wo
The sky was blue, dotted only by a few cottony clouds here and there. The atmosphere felt light, floating somewhere between cool and warm.
* * *
Softly, the breeze rustles through the small plant's leaves and caresses the man planting it. It slides trough the window, gently raises the curtain with a whisper and kindly touches the girl sitting on the living-room carpet. It feels her skin, and smoothly plays with her hair. The eight year-old silently keeps on playing with a doll under her mother's gracious gaze. Inside the house, calm reigns like it only can on a Sunday evening.
"Normally, at this time of day, I would have been playing in
We had just run to the top of the car park in the department store and you were trying to show me the cathedral where you had been baptized as a child into Catholicism (but I had forgotten my glasses and everything past your face was blurry) when you mentioned lemon sorbet and I told you I had never had it before. I remember your shocked theatrical face as you lit up into a smile, grabbed my hand, and we raced down seven flights of stairs (bumping into old ladies and shouting security guards alike) and sped out towards the supermarket.
We were out of breath when we got to the check out counter. I can picture your red face and white smile, yo
And so I've joined theWrittenRevolution (https://www.deviantart.com/thewrittenrevolution)
It's a wonderful group. I feel inspired. The genius in me is stirring ;) I'll try to get involved, comment more, and help others. I've been giving art less attention than it deserves this last year. Errors must be corrected. The new year is in less than a week: I promise I will make good use of 2010.
Finally!
I've been on DA as a (unprivileged and poor) member for some time now but it's the first time I made something that almost pleases me.
I know it's not great, but it's the first time I actually finish a short story (generally they are so _not short_ that I don't have the courage to finish them) so I'll post it nonetheless. Maybe If enough people like it (10? 20?) I might decide to write another one for DeviantART.
The deviation is dedicated to ~la-pixie because she's simply the best (